Level+4Exemplar+exposition

Wiremu argues his position through the use of points that are mostly well developed. The exposition draws on well-researched material and personal knowledge and experiences, expressed effectively by generally appropriate vocabulary and stylistic choices. The conclusion, however, does not retain the momentum and style of the previous paragraphs. This piece has been prepared for publication. [|View the original piece of work] || ||
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